高分應(yīng)用文突破系列--申請信

時(shí)間：2023-05-07 22:12:01 | 來源：網(wǎng)站運(yùn)營

時(shí)間：2023-05-07 22:12:01 來源：網(wǎng)站運(yùn)營

高分應(yīng)用文突破系列--申請信：高分應(yīng)用文突破系列--申請信

● PART 1申請信寫作技巧

1.申請信六件套:

首段:自我介紹＋背景目的

主體:性格能力＋申請理由

尾段:重申渴望＋感謝回復(fù)

2.“申清”句式

2019年全國卷

假定你是李華,暑期在倫敦學(xué)習(xí),得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展覽.請寫一封信申請做志愿者,內(nèi)容包括: 1.寫信目的: 2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢 3.能做的事情。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫; 3.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

▲首段:自我介紹+背景目的

構(gòu)思:我是李華。我是一個(gè)17歲的男孩。我正在倫敦讀書。

基礎(chǔ)版: l am Li Hua. l am a 17-year-old boy. I am studying in London.

我是李華。我是一個(gè)17歲的男孩。我正在紅星中學(xué)讀書。

基礎(chǔ)版:l am Li Hua. l am a 17-year-old boy. l am studying in Hongxing High School.

★升級版:

我是…，一個(gè)…，正在…讀書。

l am Li Hua (姓名), a 17-year-old boy (年齡), _________________ in Hongxing

High School (學(xué)校).

l am Li Hua(姓名),a Senior 3 student (身份),presently/currently studying in

Hongxing High School(學(xué)校).

我是李華,一個(gè)高三的學(xué)生,現(xiàn)在生活在杭州。

I'm Li Hua, a senior 3 student, presently ____________in Beijing.

1. live B. lived C. living http://D.am living

▲首段:自我介紹+背景目的

構(gòu)思:我在網(wǎng)上聽聞你們要舉辦國畫展.我想要成為志愿者。

基礎(chǔ)版: I read the news on the Internet.

You will hold a show.

l am very interested in it.

★升級版1: __________ the news on the website _________

you will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings

in your art gallery,I'm writing to _________ to be

a volunteer.

Having learned the news on the website that an exhibition

of Chinese paintings will be held in your art gallery,

I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer.

★詞匯升級 : news →announcement / advertisement / post

want to →am eager to / desire to join → participate in

★升級版2: Having learned the announcement on the website that an exhibition of Chinese paintings will be held in your art gallery,I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer.

Having learned the _______________ on the website _________an exhibition of Chinese paintings will be held in your art gallery,I'm ___________ to ______________ it.

★升級版3:

Your announcement on the website / in the newspaper / on TV that you will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings in your art gallery ___________ me _____ much _______ 1 couldn't _______ to participate in it.

2022年冬奧會(huì)將在杭州舉辦,目前在全國招募志愿者,假如你是李華,你希望成為一名杭州冬奧會(huì)志愿者。請根據(jù)以下提示給組委會(huì)寫封英文申請信:

1.個(gè)人情況:年齡、性別、就讀情況; 2.個(gè)人條件:英語好、愛好運(yùn)動(dòng)、善于交際、熟悉

當(dāng)?shù)厍闆r;3.承諾:提供最佳服務(wù)。

下列選項(xiàng)中正確的是

我在網(wǎng)站上看到你們發(fā)布的公告說要招募冬季奧運(yùn)會(huì)志愿者,我寫信想申請成為

志愿者中的一員。

____________________volunteers are wanted for the Winter Olympics,I'm writing to

apply to be one of them.

A.Having read your announcement on the website which

B.Having read your announcement on the website that

C.Read your announcement on the website which

D.Read your announcement on the website that

假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二(1 )班的學(xué)生李華,下個(gè)月英國Saint Gorge High School的

交換學(xué)生要來你校學(xué)習(xí),學(xué)校為此招募接待家庭。請你根據(jù)以下信息，提出申

請并說明理由。

1.家里住宿條件好; 2.英語聽說能力強(qiáng); 3.了解英國人的文化習(xí)俗。

你們在網(wǎng)站上利登的招募交換生接待家庭公告非常吸引人,給我留下了如此

深刻的印象,以至于我迫不及待地想加人。

___________________________you are going to recruit some host families for

exchange students ___________________I couldn't wait to join you.

▲首段:自我介紹+背景目的

L am Li Hua , a 17-year-old boy, ____________ ….

I am Li Hua , a Senior 3 student, ___________….

★升級版1:

Having learned the news on the website that you will hold an exhibition of

Chinese paintings in your art gallery,I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer.

★升級版2:

Having learned the ________________ on the website ________ an exhibition of

Chinese paintings will be held in your art gallery,_________________.

★升級版3:

Your ____________on the website / in the newspaper / on TV ______you will

hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings in your art gallery _____________

I couldn't wait to participate in it.

▲主體:性格能力+申請理由

構(gòu)思:我人很好,擅長交友。

基礎(chǔ)版: I am a friendly and nice person. I can get on well with others easily!

★升級版1: ___________________, I can get on well with others easily.

★升級版2:I ____________________ 性格nature , 我性格好

which helps me.... 這幫助我做事

which makes it possible for me to ... 這使我能做事

which is considered indispensable for ... 被認(rèn)為是做事必不可少的。

詞匯升級

樂觀的 optimistic

精力充沛的 energetic

可靠的 reliable

熱情的 enthusiastic/passionate

有上進(jìn)心的 ambitious

外向的 outgoing

有積極性的 motivated

有責(zé)任心的 responsible

客易相處的 easygoing

2018年6月浙江卷)

假定你是李華，你校英語協(xié)會(huì)招聘志愿者，接待來訪的國外中學(xué)生。請你寫信應(yīng)聘，內(nèi)容包括:

1.口語能力; 2.相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn); 3.應(yīng)聘目的。

下列選項(xiàng)中正確的是

我的性格熱情開朗,曾代表學(xué)校參加過很多國際文化交流活動(dòng)。

____________many international cultural exchange activities on behalf of our school.

http://A.Am enthusiastic and optimistic,I have participated in

B.An enthusiastic and optimistic,and I have participated in

C.Enthusiastic and optimistic, I have participated in

D.Enthusiastic and optimistic,and I have participated in

假定你是李華，暑期在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展。請寫

一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括:1.寫信目的;2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢;3.能做的事情。

我性格積極樂觀,這對于志愿者工作來說是必不可少的。

l own a motivated and optimistic nature,__________ indispensable for

volunteer work.

1. which is considering
2. which is considered
3. that is considered
4. that is considering

▲主體:性格能力+申請理由

構(gòu)思:我英語好,擅長交流。

基礎(chǔ)版: My English is good, so I can talk with others.

★升級版1: I ___________English ,__________ helps me

communicate with others __________/ which makes _____

possible for me to communicate with others fluently/

which is considered __________ for daily communication.

詞匯升級

有能力be capable of sth

擅長excel in sth /specialized in sth

精通have a good knowledge of /have a good command of /be well versed in sth

構(gòu)思:我英語好，得過一等獎(jiǎng)。

★升級版:

l always _______ in oral English, as a result, I have won the first place

in the English speaking contest ______ by my school.

構(gòu)思:我能讓外國人了解中國，感受中國文化。

基礎(chǔ)版:

l can show Chinese culture, and let them know Chinese culture.

★升級版1: Not only can I ..., but also ... = characteristics

Not only can I make foreigners understand the ______ of Chinese paintings

___________ my introduction , but also I can let them feel the ___________

Chinese culture.

經(jīng)過我的輔導(dǎo),不僅可以幫你提高普通話水平,還可以帶你了解更多

關(guān)于中國習(xí)俗和文化。(多選).

_________help you improve your Mandarin through my tutoring,

but also make you learn more about Chinese customs and culture.

A.Can I not only

B. I can not only

C. Not only I can

D. Not only can l

( 2018年6月浙江卷)

假定你是李華,你校英語協(xié)會(huì)招聘志愿者,接待來訪的國外中學(xué)生。

請你寫信應(yīng)聘，內(nèi)容包括:1.口語能力; 2.相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn); 3.應(yīng)聘目的。

我的口語很流利,因此我多次在學(xué)校舉辦的口語大賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng).

下列句子翻譯正確的是(多選).

1. Well versed in oral English, l have won the first prize
   in the Spoken English competition held by our school
   for several times.
2. Excel in oral English, I have won the first prize in the
   Spoken English competition held by our school for
   several times.
3. I capable of speaking English, which has won me the
   first prize in the Spoken English Competition for several
   times.
4. Having a good command of spoken English, I have
   won the first prize in the Spoken English Competition
   held by our school before.
   ▲尾段:重申渴望+感謝回復(fù)
   構(gòu)思:我希望能得到這個(gè)工作。謝謝啊。
   基礎(chǔ)版: l hope I can get this position at last.
   ★升級版: I would appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity to join as a
   volunteer. = consider my application.
   詞匯升級
   consider my application → take my sincere application into consideration
   l would appreciate it if you could take my sincere application into consideration.
   ▲尾段:重申渴望+感謝回復(fù)
   構(gòu)思:期待你的回信。
   基礎(chǔ)版:I am looking forward to your reply.
   ★升級版: I shall feel _____________ by a reply at your earliest convenience.
   Your ____________ reply would be _____________ appreciated.
   ▲尾段:重申渴望+感謝回復(fù)
   l would appreciate it if you could ____ my ______ application
   _________. I shall feel ________ by a reply _____ your earliest
   convenience/Your ______ reply would be _______ appreciated.
   全文欣賞：
   I am Li Hua,a 17-year-old boy, presently/currently studying in
   London this summer vacation. Having learned the announcement
   on the website that you will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings
   in your art gallery, I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer.
   Friendly as well as easygoing,I can get on well with others
   easily.I have a good command of English,which makes it possible
   for me to communicate with others fluently. Not only can I make
   foreigners understand the features of Chinese paintings through
   my introduction,but also I can let them feel the great Chinese culture.
   I would appreciate it if you could take my sincere application
   into consideration. Your prompt reply would be highly appreciated.
   ● PART 2申請信篇章訓(xùn)練
   (2021年杭州市第八中學(xué)月考卷)
   假定你是李華，從網(wǎng)上得知一個(gè)國際中學(xué)生組織將在中國舉辦冬令營，歡迎各國學(xué)生參加。請寫一封郵件申請參加。內(nèi)容包括: 1.自我介紹; 2.參加目的;3.希望成功。
   ▲首段:自我介紹
   l am Li Hua, presently studying in Hongxing High School.
   ▲背景+目的
   _______________________the news from the website that a winter camp will be held by a world-renowned International High School Association, I'm writing to participate in this event.
   下列選項(xiàng)中翻譯正確的是____________
   我是李華,一個(gè)對旅行和結(jié)識朋友特別感興趣的高中生。
1. Tm Li Hua, a senior high student who have a particular interest in travelling,nd making friends.

B.I'm Li Hua, a senior high student who have a particular interest in travel and make friends.

C. I'm Li Hua, a senior high student who has a particular interest in travelling and making friends.

D. I'm Li Hua, a senior high student who has a particular interest in travel and make friends.

你們在網(wǎng)站上的公告說一個(gè)非常有名的國際高中協(xié)會(huì)將在我的祖國舉行冬令營,這讓我印象如此深刻,以至于我迫不及待地想要加入.

_____________________________________a winter camp is to be held in our

motherland by a world renowned International High School Association

_______________________________________.

▲主體:性格能力＋申請理由

___________________(熟練掌握) English allows me to participate in various contests and activities ____________（在國內(nèi)外) , making me a more competitive individual.

▲主體:性格能力＋申請理由

What's more, _______________ (我很自信且心胸開闊) ,which helps me make friends

from other cultural backgrounds quickly.

▲主體:性格能力＋申請理由

Meanwhile,I _____________(我對中國文化有濃厚的興趣) Chinese culture,

_____________________(使得我可以) share with foreign friends about the

classics, the folk art,the traditional crafts etc.

▲主體:性格能力＋申請理由

Having an excellent command of English allows me to participate in

various contests and activities both at home and abroad, making me a

more competitive individual. What's more,I have a confident and

broad-minded nature,which helps me make friends from other cultural

backgrounds quickly. Meanwhile,I have a keen interest in Chinese

culture,making it possible for me to share with foreign friends about

the classics, the folk art, the traditional crafts etc.

▲尾段:重申渴望+感謝回復(fù)

I __________(我將不勝感激）if you could give me the opportunity

to join in the camp.I'm looking forward to your early reply.

如果您能考慮我誠摯的申請，我會(huì)非常感激的。一旦被錄取，我會(huì)更加樂意努力學(xué)習(xí)提升自己的成績。(多選題)

__________________________________Once accepted, I will be more than delighted to work harder for my academic performance.

1. I would appreciate if you could take my sincere application into account
2. I would appreciate it if you could take my sincere application into account

C. I would appreciate if you could take my sincere application into consideration.

D. I would appreciate it if you could take my sincere application into consideration.

全文欣賞：

l am Li Hua,presently studying in Hongxing High School. Having learned the news from the website that a winter camp will be held by an International High School Association,I'm writing to participate in this event.

Having an excellent command of English allows me to participate in various contests and activities, making me a more competitive individual.What's more,I have a confident and broad-minded nature, which helps me make friends from other cultural backgrounds quickly. Meanwhile,I love Chinese culture, making it possible for me to share with foreign friends about the classics and traditional crafts.

I would appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity to join in the camp.I'm looking forward to your reply.

●實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練

1.假定你是李華,暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí),得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展,請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的； 2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢； 3.能做的事情。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右； 2.開頭及結(jié)束語已寫好。

2.假定你是李華，你和另一個(gè)學(xué)生是合住一間宿舍的常住生。你發(fā)現(xiàn)無法忍受室友的一些行為，請給宿舍管理員寫一封信，申請下學(xué)期更換房間。

內(nèi)容包括：(1)提出換房要求 (2)闡述具體原因。 注意：字?jǐn)?shù)80左右。

3.假定你是李華，打算應(yīng)聘你校學(xué)生英語報(bào)Youth的Growing Up Stories欄目的編輯，請用英語寫一封應(yīng)聘信，內(nèi)容包括：1.對欄目的理解； 2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢。

注意：1.寫作詞匯應(yīng)為80左右; 2.請按如下格式在答案卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

4.假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展覽。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：1. 寫信目的； 2. 個(gè)人優(yōu)勢；3. 能做的事情。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

5.假定你是高三學(xué)生李華，你校正在組織由外教Mr. Smith選拔兩名同學(xué)參加英國牛津大

學(xué)(University of Oxford)的冬令營。請你給外教Mr. Smith發(fā)一封郵件申請參加。

內(nèi)容包括：1.自我介紹；2.申請理由；3.期待獲準(zhǔn)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。